Once, a girl came to me
None I know
None I understand
Through my ignorance she smiled
On my heart she was singing the days
I was engraving my words on her life
As the time flew me to the palace of affection
She covered me by the nectar
As the tongue tastes sour
For I know, she is standing behind me still
When the flame is touching the heel of mine
Time might forget her face
But for what she has done, the face would be still there alive
Once, I visit your blog
None I ignore
None I uncare
Through my mind I smiled
What a good blog
By: Iis Kusaeri on July 17, 2008
at 4:57 am
Just to pray this blog will be useful for everyone. Amin
By: myenglish01 on July 18, 2008
at 10:06 am
I think this poetry is very interest,because this poetry talk about someone who meet with the beauty women and I feel that its journey is my life and I always remember it.
By: oky nuralim hidayat XI IPA on July 30, 2008
at 8:49 am
this poetry to tell about a man which to love a girl. he very love to a girl. on he heart she was singing the day and he was engraving my words on her life. that a girl have face would that be still there alive. so, i think this poetry is very interesting. thanks you . . . . .
By: Andri Maulana XI.IA.1 on July 31, 2008
at 10:40 am
this poetry talk about a man is falling love, he is fell happy with it and it make he’s fall face of women it always still in him live…
for me this poetry is very interesting, because this poetry have happened in my life..
By: Hidayatullah Hamdani XI.IA on August 1, 2008
at 12:03 pm
my opinion is:
very nice
very good
and very interesting….
this poetry talk about a man is falling in love to girl. she was singing in man days.
By: Edgard Lam Martua XI IA on August 1, 2008
at 3:06 pm
this poetry talk about a man admired a girl ever come with to arrive in the heart, thought already to pass time but her face it not can at freed in the heart.
By: hasanuddin on August 3, 2008
at 1:55 pm
this poetry talk about a man admired a girl ever come with to arrive in the heart, thought already to pass time but her face it not can at freed in the heart.
by:hasanuddin
Class: XI IA
By: hasanuddin on August 3, 2008
at 2:00 pm
my opinion about this poetry is so wonderfull, because the lyirics are nice, romantic, and not only that i ever feel the situation. And it is about a man doesn’t know if there is a woman whocares by him
By: Sulaeman_XI. IPA.1 on August 4, 2008
at 8:05 am
this poetry tell about a boy haven’t friend and suddenly a girl came to his, what make startled let alone following a girl smiled to his. until a boy imagine fly to bring love her but, a reality she is still there alive.
for me this poetry interesting because, remember me to a person
By: sutan hafif f. XI IA 1 on August 4, 2008
at 1:40 pm
i think is good. the poetry is tell about even that happened to a boy. but i don’t know, do poetry even clear! and sometimes the poetry sentences less i understand it’s my opinion for the poetry. thank you.
By: Tati Sumiati XI.IPA on August 5, 2008
at 1:04 am