Disaat mata terpejam

Disaat mata akan terpejam

Ingin sekali aku melihat dirimu

Hadir dalam indahnya mimpi

Ingin, ingin aku melihat

Senyum hatimu yang mendamaikan

Saat kutanya orang tentang dirimu

Seribu tanya mereka meninggalkanku

Dalam kelam aku bersandar

Entah siapa yang daku kejar

Saat mata terpejam

Inginlah daku

Bersamamu seorang

2 thoughts on “Disaat mata terpejam

  1. I want to opinion this poetry..

    A bout this poetry:
    This poetry to tell a bout some one to miss the present “God”,in dream or True. When he question to people a bout “God”, People is not respon with he, people not give answer. At last a bout “God”, but some one That always to miss “God”.

    My opinion:
    I think This poetry is…
    – very good,
    – my heart to scattered with it,
    – verb to use sontinuation, and
    – to make people is fell sad.

    That is my opinion a bout it, if I is not true, I’m sorry, Thank’s…

  2. d saat aq tlelap
    sbuah mimpi bhembus
    mengantarkan wajahmu seorang

    d saat aq tjaga
    tbayangkan snyum indahmu
    mbawa aq k alam khayal

    d saat aq tpejam
    ingnku bkan skedar mjd kawanmu
    ingnku jdkan mu plepas lelah kebahagian ku

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