I’m sitting under the clouds

I am sitting under dark clouds

For minutes, hours or even days

Don’t know whom I have been waiting for

Just here,

On a bench I am sitting

Under dark clouds I am waiting

For whom I never know

A storm strongly lights the sky

But no meaning, none I understand

Rain in tears are falling down

No words no answer

What I know

What I understand

Only the one

I am waiting under dark clouds


8 thoughts on “I’m sitting under the clouds

  1. Name : Rio Prawira Diputra
    Class : XI IPA 1

    My opinion for this puisi is good.
    The story is very interesting.
    and meaning of the story is about someone whom never know what he is waiting for.
    That’s my opinion about your puisi.
    Thank you.

  2. my opinion about this.
    this puisi is same with my story love and I think it’s can make me wake up for my dream. . .
    this puisi is very-very nice and good. . . .
    i hope other people read it will say same with me.

  3. This poetry talk about someone wait something but no reasons. Complicate in situation of dark make self someone to be come speeghless to that situation.

    my OpinioN
    This poetry is very really touching,,,,
    although the sentences very simple but the mean from poetry very deep…..!!!!!

  4. my opinion about this poetry is very good and interesting.

    which telling about there’s someone sitting under the dark clouds for waiting something eventhought rain are falling down in the sky there’s strom strongly lights but no answer,for waiting.
    only one that I know,there’s and someone sitting under the clouds.

  5. I don’t even know how I ended up here, but I thought this post was good. I don’t know who you are but certainly you’re going to a famous blogger if you aren’t
    already ;) Cheers!

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