Once

Once, a girl came to me

None I know

None I understand

Through my ignorance she smiled

On my heart she was singing the days

I was engraving my words on her life

As the time flew me to the palace of affection

She covered me by the nectar

As the tongue tastes sour

For I know, she is standing behind me still

When the flame is touching the heel of mine

Time might forget her face

But for what she has done, the face would be still there alive

11 thoughts on “Once

  1. I think this poetry is very interest,because this poetry talk about someone who meet with the beauty women and I feel that its journey is my life and I always remember it.

  2. this poetry to tell about a man which to love a girl. he very love to a girl. on he heart she was singing the day and he was engraving my words on her life. that a girl have face would that be still there alive. so, i think this poetry is very interesting. thanks you . . . . .

  3. this poetry talk about a man is falling love, he is fell happy with it and it make he’s fall face of women it always still in him live…
    for me this poetry is very interesting, because this poetry have happened in my life..

  4. my opinion is:

    very nice
    very good
    and very interesting….

    this poetry talk about a man is falling in love to girl. she was singing in man days.

  5. this poetry talk about a man admired a girl ever come with to arrive in the heart, thought already to pass time but her face it not can at freed in the heart.

  6. this poetry talk about a man admired a girl ever come with to arrive in the heart, thought already to pass time but her face it not can at freed in the heart.

    by:hasanuddin
    Class: XI IA

  7. my opinion about this poetry is so wonderfull, because the lyirics are nice, romantic, and not only that i ever feel the situation. And it is about a man doesn’t know if there is a woman whocares by him

  8. this poetry tell about a boy haven’t friend and suddenly a girl came to his, what make startled let alone following a girl smiled to his. until a boy imagine fly to bring love her but, a reality she is still there alive.

    for me this poetry interesting because, remember me to a person

  9. i think is good. the poetry is tell about even that happened to a boy. but i don’t know, do poetry even clear! and sometimes the poetry sentences less i understand it’s my opinion for the poetry. thank you.

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